I plan to translate the game to few other languages including spanish but that's a task for one of the future updates when I'll save up some money to pay someone to translate it.
I do not want to use some online translator tool because we all know how badly can they sometimes translate something so i need to hire someone to do it.
As of now no femboy/futa is planned in the game. Im focusing on introducing my full planned cast of goth girls which will take a while.
If enough people will want it tho - i can consider adding some futa SIDE CHARACTER apart from the main story sometime in the future. But i leave that to the voice of the people someday.
awesome i like that idea i know its not everyone's cup of tea but i thought it wouldn't hurt to ask : D cant wait to play the update downloading it for tomorrow
I plan to release them as soon as i can. Right now i juggle coding with two jobs to keep me alive and not homeless so it takes me a little more time. 1.1 Update is planned to release in December and I am doing my best to deliver. Worst case scenario its january but i will try as hard as i can to deliver it this year.
Hey, game seems cool, but it's been flagged by Itch as potentially a scam? Never seen anything like this, page seems perfectly legit, but I figured it wouldn't hurt to ask before downloading.
That fucking blows dude. And speaking of, I genuinely appreciate the option to skip the scene. I'm not a cringelord incel, it's just not my thing. Great game so far! (I have no impulse control and downloaded it anyway)
One lesbian scene that happens 3 years in the past, added as a plot set-up, made a few people mad. Added skip option in the hotfix and moved on. I think all's good now.
Besides that I got many nice comments and feedback and I am having a blast making next update now. :D
Thanks for miss-leading "reviews" posted without actually playing the game and without reading the description that clearly denies everything you all just typed. ggwp
Deleting your comments to not spread miss-information to new players, as you clearly stated, you don't know what are you talking about.
not a fan of disabling rollback and q.save/q.load when there are options, this game has a sense of humour and I want to explore without having to manually save at ever choice to see the various outcomes
and my dyslexia has me going back every like 5 lines to double check a word (I can use history there but it's way more awkward than scroll up), or I'll see something in a previous frame and want to go back to double check what it was because I only noticed it right as I clicked but can't and my last save was too far back to bother loading and I'd need to use skip and I'd probably skip over it
lesbo cucks will have depression after seeing that, as long as sharing is with other girls they are ok, but with males is big no for these hypocrite weirdos xd xd
This whole avn genre and people there are full of shit man. Especially all these NTR male haters. I still remember one big drama in one game when girl mentioned that she is not a virgin or has/had a BF haha.
I will tell you one thing - fuck these mentally ill insecure people, especially people like one user already said: "anti-male lesbo cucks" - that was good one haha
I'm guessing there used to be more haters down there but is it really over one lesbian scene? it'd be far from the first game with intra harem relationships and I assume the "one...skippable...none planned in future" is in response to them? I say let the girls have fun lol XD
edit: it's before you've even met either of the girls what insecure babies are upset about some hot goth lesbian action, like sure seeing another dude (especially if it were some random) might be weird but lesbian action between 2 of your future girlfriends ain't even close to what the NTR bitches are moaning about, also played a few vns where there were optional scenes of your girls past lovers and nobody complained about those what kinda fucked up wormhole did this comment section come out of????
Tbh there were two more planned in the span of the next six updates. So rewrithing them for threesomes wasn't even hard. I can make the optional lesbian scenes if poeple would want them but that's a subjejct for 1.4 and 1.7. Nothing to bother about rn.
the hate is wild to me, I've literally never seen this reaction and have played plenty of vns with intra harem sharing the NTR lovers really latched on
and sharing isn't NTR, atleast to english speakers since we use the word sharing, NTR is exclusively used to refer to cheating or stealing girls and almost always cringy fukbois stealing girls. yes I know netorase exists but the only time I see people use it is to say "well akshually sharing is NTR because of this other japanese word that people don't commonly use" to which the answer is when people use that and aren't trying to hate or push for the inclusion of full blown NTR they use NTS to differentiate them
lastly not liking sharing with other males is a breeding instinct (females can't impregnate your girl) and so long as they stay with you it's all just fun
Personally I love the design and some lesbian seggs if well done, so I hope the dev won't listen to a sexually frustrated minority and keep going with their planned content, including lesbian.
Well the only thing that changed after being bombarded with feedback is adding mc to two scenes and adding a skip button. So not much and since people will be happier because of such a minor change then it's a win win in my book. At the end of the game its still my story to tell. I will deliver my vision.
Dev should put male characters in the game who will fuck MC girls, then you will be crying and have mental breakdown you hypocrite anti-male lesbo cuck
wow so many downvotes, did you go to cry to your pals in r/frustratedIncel? You say you want a Harem, but the girls can only have you as the center of your world.
That reeks of deep insecurity, is your pp so small? I'm sorry. Did they explain to you in 1st grade that there do exist psychiatrists in the world and they can help you and your friends?
Can't believe so many people are against lesbian/bi-sexual content between LIs, especially with them being planned to be in the harem. It's even more wild that people actually consider that NTR.
Really looking forward to this project growing, don't let the nay-sayers get to you.
I think the way i planned these two girls joining the harem when i wrote the initial script will make every one happy. But that's a story for future updates. dont want to spoil anything but i think i will deliver something that most people would like that's exactly my unchanged vision.
Excellent Introduction. Enjoyed it a lot. The character banter is the star of this so far. A great mix of fun and romance. Will be playing more when it's available.
Some feedback and thoughts:
Please turn on the renpy back function. I think I’ve seen you already say this is planned but adding to the request.
The choice prompts with only a single choice feel a little why is this done this way.
I’m probably in the minority but I liked and enjoyed the scenes with Jade and Noemi. The banter was good and interesting. Characters are allowed to have joy independent of the MC being in the scene.
Like the look of the roadmap and planned themes. Clarification of BDSM is on the list but you don’t explicitly put in Maledom with that though most people probably assume that is the direction.
Some concern of dropping into the open world setup. A lot of sandboxes feel like they blunt the narrative momentum of the story. And the linear story in the intro has been a good flow and feel. Would hate to feel like that got lost going forward.
Final note on communication. You do not currently have a discord or a free tier on Patreon which are the main ways I get creator updates pushed out to me. So right now I need to remember to come back and check on the game periodically to check and see if there are updates. Don’t know if it’s worth your time but something to consider.
Once again I enjoyed it. Thanks for the work you put into this, and look forward to more.
Rollback noted, choices will be made better in 1.1 with small diffrent outcomes. Rn added them mostly so my adhd homie playtester would not whine about not having things to click. From 1.1 they will matter more.
Jade and Noe intro is still here just for building their character background and set up their arrivals into the harem and i planned it in a way that i think will make people happy. Bdsm will definitelly be both ways. Dom women are my kryptonite.
Bout map. Yeah... i am thinking about it heavily after feedback on my writing and people liking it. Probably the way to go is add semi open sections in some plot points and leave the open world free to explore when the story of the update ends.
I will deliver like a 1 dollar tier for people who just want to see some release posts and discord access, to not accumulate spam accounts.
Thanks for a nice feedback. Can't wait to deliver more.
Lol, I can definately see the button to click design choice in that framing. Follow up question on the BDSM for your answer. Is your dynamic one way with a specific character? Or will you switch back and forth with the same character?
Can BDSM and yandere LIs be avoided? On the other hand, I'm not a big fan of group content because it's usually an excuse to sneak in lesbian content by claiming "technically it isn't lesbian." But I still don't like it.
It has its flaws (I loved the background errors), but I loved everything I saw. Mia's dynamic with the MC, the interesting characters presented, the care taken with the models and scenes, the attention to detail—I find it hard to believe this is a first project. I'm deeply invested in the story and can't wait to see more. And I'm grateful for the road map.
My only "tip" would be to be careful with grammar. Not for me, but I know plenty of people who are capable of marking a game as bad if it has too many errors.
Again, a great game. Keep cooking and don't rush perfection.
Thanks! This means a lot. Really. To be honest I expected like 3 people total to play the game and i got flooded with feedback and mostly nice words from people who actually read what i wrote. And yeah. It's first ever ever project like this. Can't wait to make it greater with each update.
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I said this in my review but it's worth repeating for the comments:
This game is legitimately great and I believe the author should be allowed to round up the people who whined about the yuri and hunt them for sport
(for legal reasons, this is a hyperbolic joke. obviously somebody else would do the rounding up)
Are you planning to add Spanish?
I plan to translate the game to few other languages including spanish but that's a task for one of the future updates when I'll save up some money to pay someone to translate it.
I do not want to use some online translator tool because we all know how badly can they sometimes translate something so i need to hire someone to do it.
think you'll add the femboy or futa tag? im guessing no but thought id ask
As of now no femboy/futa is planned in the game. Im focusing on introducing my full planned cast of goth girls which will take a while.
If enough people will want it tho - i can consider adding some futa SIDE CHARACTER apart from the main story sometime in the future.
But i leave that to the voice of the people someday.
awesome i like that idea i know its not everyone's cup of tea but i thought it wouldn't hurt to ask : D cant wait to play the update downloading it for tomorrow
Finally a goth girl focused game! Nice kinks. :) I hope the game catches on. How often do you want to release new updates?
I plan to release them as soon as i can. Right now i juggle coding with two jobs to keep me alive and not homeless so it takes me a little more time.
1.1 Update is planned to release in December and I am doing my best to deliver. Worst case scenario its january but i will try as hard as i can to deliver it this year.
Hey, game seems cool, but it's been flagged by Itch as potentially a scam? Never seen anything like this, page seems perfectly legit, but I figured it wouldn't hurt to ask before downloading.
Well i probably got mass reported cause i put two girls kissing in a scene.
That fucking blows dude. And speaking of, I genuinely appreciate the option to skip the scene. I'm not a cringelord incel, it's just not my thing. Great game so far! (I have no impulse control and downloaded it anyway)
Stumbled across this game, thought it looked interesting, never seen so many fragile incels in one comment section before, wtf happened here?
One lesbian scene that happens 3 years in the past, added as a plot set-up, made a few people mad.
Added skip option in the hotfix and moved on. I think all's good now.
Besides that I got many nice comments and feedback and I am having a blast making next update now. :D
That's it? Most AVN have way more stuff happening between love interests, and I've literally NEVER seen vitriol like this
Honestly, don't even bother listening to whiny mfs like that, just do what you're gonna do and have fun with it lol
game looking great
Thank you!<3
Thanks for miss-leading "reviews" posted without actually playing the game and without reading the description that clearly denies everything you all just typed.
ggwp
Deleting your comments to not spread miss-information to new players, as you clearly stated, you don't know what are you talking about.
not a fan of disabling rollback and q.save/q.load when there are options, this game has a sense of humour and I want to explore without having to manually save at ever choice to see the various outcomes
and my dyslexia has me going back every like 5 lines to double check a word (I can use history there but it's way more awkward than scroll up), or I'll see something in a previous frame and want to go back to double check what it was because I only noticed it right as
I clicked but can't and my last save was too far back to bother loading and I'd need to use skip and I'd probably skip over it
Yep rollback will be added. Already noted on todolist.
sick
I'll be following your career with great interest.
I'll be awaiting your comments with great anticipation.
add male characters and maybe gangbangs or MMF :) I'm not into lesbian NTR
lesbo cucks will have depression after seeing that, as long as sharing is with other girls they are ok, but with males is big no for these hypocrite weirdos xd xd
This whole avn genre and people there are full of shit man. Especially all these NTR male haters. I still remember one big drama in one game when girl mentioned that she is not a virgin or has/had a BF haha.
I will tell you one thing - fuck these mentally ill insecure people, especially people like one user already said: "anti-male lesbo cucks" - that was good one haha
That group become very loudly lately and making serious drama if they only hear about any other male than MC.
There will be no NTR in the game. sorry.
Closest thing is threesome foursome with girls.
I'm guessing there used to be more haters down there but is it really over one lesbian scene? it'd be far from the first game with intra harem relationships and I assume the "one...skippable...none planned in future" is in response to them? I say let the girls have fun lol XD
edit: it's before you've even met either of the girls what insecure babies are upset about some hot goth lesbian action, like sure seeing another dude (especially if it were some random) might be weird but lesbian action between 2 of your future girlfriends ain't even close to what the NTR bitches are moaning about, also played a few vns where there were optional scenes of your girls past lovers and nobody complained about those what kinda fucked up wormhole did this comment section come out of????
Tbh there were two more planned in the span of the next six updates. So rewrithing them for threesomes wasn't even hard. I can make the optional lesbian scenes if poeple would want them but that's a subjejct for 1.4 and 1.7. Nothing to bother about rn.
the hate is wild to me, I've literally never seen this reaction and have played plenty of vns with intra harem sharing the NTR lovers really latched on
and sharing isn't NTR, atleast to english speakers since we use the word sharing, NTR is exclusively used to refer to cheating or stealing girls and almost always cringy fukbois stealing girls. yes I know netorase exists but the only time I see people use it is to say "well akshually sharing is NTR because of this other japanese word that people don't commonly use" to which the answer is when people use that and aren't trying to hate or push for the inclusion of full blown NTR they use NTS to differentiate them
lastly not liking sharing with other males is a breeding instinct (females can't impregnate your girl) and so long as they stay with you it's all just fun
man the haters are reporting you or something cause your game is on quarantine and you have to dig for the "I want to download anyway" button
Checked in 4 diffrent browsers on two pcs. Problem must be on your side. Everything shows up fine for me
lol. All my homies who checked had it worked. So really idk.
lol who dislikes an informative image? XD haters be wildin
Personally I love the design and some lesbian seggs if well done, so I hope the dev won't listen to a sexually frustrated minority and keep going with their planned content, including lesbian.
Well the only thing that changed after being bombarded with feedback is adding mc to two scenes and adding a skip button. So not much and since people will be happier because of such a minor change then it's a win win in my book.
At the end of the game its still my story to tell. I will deliver my vision.
Guys if lesbian scenes are so offensive to you just go and play Minecraft. Smh for snowflakey little bitches
Dev should put male characters in the game who will fuck MC girls, then you will be crying and have mental breakdown you hypocrite anti-male lesbo cuck
don't bother bro with these cucks. They will always find excuses for their beloved fetish
Imagine being so insecure that your TWO girlfriends kissing each other makes you panic LMAO.
Hey, it's NTR if they share the same oxygen on the same planet!!!
Like i fear the first threesome scene feedback lol. Gonna be crazy.
Eh I wouldn't worry too much about that since you've already said the group stuff would be optional on another site anyway
yeah, bunch of hypocrites. If these girls starts kissing other guys then you will see a REAL drama haha :D weirdos
You wouldn't believe how many dms asking for NTR with other dudes i got already. Gotta make that NO NTR with bigger font i think lol
wow so many downvotes, did you go to cry to your pals in r/frustratedIncel? You say you want a Harem, but the girls can only have you as the center of your world.
That reeks of deep insecurity, is your pp so small? I'm sorry. Did they explain to you in 1st grade that there do exist psychiatrists in the world and they can help you and your friends?
go to a swinging club if you love sharing that much :D you pathetic cuck
he's a real loser, People like him should be cucked all the time
Can't believe so many people are against lesbian/bi-sexual content between LIs, especially with them being planned to be in the harem. It's even more wild that people actually consider that NTR.
Really looking forward to this project growing, don't let the nay-sayers get to you.
I think the way i planned these two girls joining the harem when i wrote the initial script will make every one happy.
But that's a story for future updates. dont want to spoil anything but i think i will deliver something that most people would like that's exactly my unchanged vision.
Excellent Introduction. Enjoyed it a lot. The character banter is the star of this so far. A great mix of fun and romance. Will be playing more when it's available.
Some feedback and thoughts:
Please turn on the renpy back function. I think I’ve seen you already say this is planned but adding to the request.
The choice prompts with only a single choice feel a little why is this done this way.
I’m probably in the minority but I liked and enjoyed the scenes with Jade and Noemi. The banter was good and interesting. Characters are allowed to have joy independent of the MC being in the scene.
Like the look of the roadmap and planned themes. Clarification of BDSM is on the list but you don’t explicitly put in Maledom with that though most people probably assume that is the direction.
Some concern of dropping into the open world setup. A lot of sandboxes feel like they blunt the narrative momentum of the story. And the linear story in the intro has been a good flow and feel. Would hate to feel like that got lost going forward.
Final note on communication. You do not currently have a discord or a free tier on Patreon which are the main ways I get creator updates pushed out to me. So right now I need to remember to come back and check on the game periodically to check and see if there are updates. Don’t know if it’s worth your time but something to consider.
Once again I enjoyed it. Thanks for the work you put into this, and look forward to more.
Rollback noted, choices will be made better in 1.1 with small diffrent outcomes. Rn added them mostly so my adhd homie playtester would not whine about not having things to click. From 1.1 they will matter more.
Jade and Noe intro is still here just for building their character background and set up their arrivals into the harem and i planned it in a way that i think will make people happy.
Bdsm will definitelly be both ways. Dom women are my kryptonite.
Bout map. Yeah... i am thinking about it heavily after feedback on my writing and people liking it. Probably the way to go is add semi open sections in some plot points and leave the open world free to explore when the story of the update ends.
I will deliver like a 1 dollar tier for people who just want to see some release posts and discord access, to not accumulate spam accounts.
Thanks for a nice feedback. Can't wait to deliver more.
Lol, I can definately see the button to click design choice in that framing. Follow up question on the BDSM for your answer. Is your dynamic one way with a specific character? Or will you switch back and forth with the same character?
Can't spoil so much. You would have to join the ride and see for yourself hehe.
Can BDSM and yandere LIs be avoided? On the other hand, I'm not a big fan of group content because it's usually an excuse to sneak in lesbian content by claiming "technically it isn't lesbian." But I still don't like it.
Honestly... I wasn't expecting such a good game.
It has its flaws (I loved the background errors), but I loved everything I saw. Mia's dynamic with the MC, the interesting characters presented, the care taken with the models and scenes, the attention to detail—I find it hard to believe this is a first project. I'm deeply invested in the story and can't wait to see more. And I'm grateful for the road map.
My only "tip" would be to be careful with grammar. Not for me, but I know plenty of people who are capable of marking a game as bad if it has too many errors.
Again, a great game. Keep cooking and don't rush perfection.
Thanks! This means a lot. Really.
To be honest I expected like 3 people total to play the game and i got flooded with feedback and mostly nice words from people who actually read what i wrote.
And yeah. It's first ever ever project like this. Can't wait to make it greater with each update.
I am going back to the kitchen soon.
I'm fucking sold this looks interesting
meow
No thanks. If you do a project in the future with harem free of lesbians or bisexuals, I'll probably throw my money at that. Good luck.
Maybe one day I will. But that's a far future. Thanks